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Chapter 9 – Part 1: Spinning Yarns


Spinning Yarns

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You and Ameronis arrived at The Warrior’s Edge where you saw the facilities and learned about what else was on offer. Terris, the woman from The Grand Jamboree, turned out to be the archery instructor, and welcome you, Ameronis and a handful of other newcomers to the class.

You learned the archery basics and did poorly, but Terris seems to be a good teacher. She showed her skills, and assistant teacher Sin showed poor skill in archery but excelled with a throwing knife. After the lesson, you and Ameronis joined the teachers for lunch in The Warrior’s Heath tea house.

Inside, you, Ameronis, Terris, Sin, and students Kemon and Jent shared stories of life in Derna and on the road. Sin praised your resourcefulness and encouraged you to attend his climbing session; after a short period of watching him and his students, you and Ameronis set off to visit the beggars.

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The bell above the entrance chimes as you enter the washhouse, and Magara looks up from her ironing with a warm smile. “Well, look who’s back! Here to collect your clothes? Drop off some more? Both?”

You explain that you’re here to pick up your cleaned clothes.

“Oh yes! One moment…” She briefly disappears into another room, then returns with a neatly bundled set of clothes; clean, soft and smelling of soap.

“There you go!” she says, handing them to you. “Need anything else?”

You tell her that the two of you are ready to fill the others in on what you discovered at The Warrior’s Edge, if now’s an appropriate time for it.

“I’ll go check with Morrie,” she says. “Hold on.”

She disappears into the back room while you pack away your clothes; you hear the voices of the others speaking loudly in the background as the door is opened. You faintly hear someone exclaim “Of course! Bring ’em in here!”, with their voices fading again as the door swings shut when Magara makes her way back to you. She meets you with a smile.

“Morrie says it’s OK. You can go back there and tell them all about it.”

With a glance at Ameronis, you proceed into the back room, bracing yourself just before you enter. Upon seeing you, Morrie, Brinnet, Ellie, Agnai and Grace all greet you cheerfully, as they work on piles of clothes and sinks full of suds. They welcome you warmly, as though you’re long, lost friends.

“Welcome, welcome girls!” says Grace, “how ya been? You got news for us?”

Taking a seat on one of the benches, you and Ameronis fill them in on your experiences today; what you found at The Warriors Edge, who you met, and what you thought of the place, along with your experience with the archery. You tell them about the classes and the various time slots, the pricing and memberships, and the daily lunch and dinner social gatherings.

All of this sounds quite interesting to them, with some considering a few of the options, and steering clear of others; there’s a morbid curiosity when it comes to taking the wrestling and boxing classes with Gideon; they wonder how many times over they’ll die whilst attempting to study under him. The concept of studying martial arts under the gentler sounding “Jenenora” sounds much more inviting. However, you point out that you never saw Jenenora, so there’s a chance that she’s just a female version of the big, brutish-looking Gideon, rather than a small, soft lady who wouldn’t break you in half. After a pause and shared glances, the girls concede that it’s definitely a possibility. But, would that make things better for them or worse?

They enquire about the other teachers you saw; Terris and Sin, Gideon briefly as you passed by, and Captain Cedric to an even lesser degree as you watched Sin. Also, while you were in the tea house, Sin pointed out another teacher as he came and went; Alden. According to the timetable, he does running classes.

Suddenly, Grace wonders out loud if any of the tutors are attractive, and the scene immediately devolves into another layer of chaos, with shouting, laughter and a lot of teasing. You and Ameronis are grilled for details of the perceived attractiveness of the male instructors, and they bicker over whether any of them stand a chance at snagging one of them. When Agnai stops folding clothes to rebuff Ellie, she is quickly scolded by Morrie and hurriedly gets back to work, while Morrie reins the rest of them in.

“You can go fight over the men in the wrestling ring. After you’ve finished your work! Now pipe down!”

Reluctantly, they agree to drop the subject, but encourage the two of you to finish sharing any further info you have. With your report complete, they thank you for the info and consider their options for times and classes, suggesting they might go and swing by themselves when their shift is over. They might go to the evening tea house social instead of The Copper Mug tonight and check it out then.

With your job done, and not wanting to be a further distraction (nor continue to be buffeted by their animated conversations), you and Ameronis decide to take your leave. The girls are sad that you’re going, but tell you to come visit them again. Ameronis mentions that she’ll bring her stuff for them to wash soon as well.

Back out on the street, the two of you stand outside, momentarily stunned. Time for… some unwinding, you think.

You suggest to Ameronis that you’re thinking of going and relaxing in the park for a while, and ask if she’d like to come, or if she’s got other plans. Having been meaning to visit it herself, Ameronis opts to join you, so the two of you navigate to Magnolia Court Gardens.

A short while later, you rest on an ornate bench in the park, surrounded by soft colours and petals, the air filled with sweet, fresh scents, and hearing nothing but the wind in the trees behind you, and the soft chatter of nearby birds. Leaning back, you watch the waterfowl as they glide across the lake before you, and Ameronis as she attracts the birds to herself. Along the way, the two of you encountered a gentleman strolling around the lake and pushing a cart full of bird seeds; offering to sell them to visitors, Ameronis happily purchased a bag.

You watch as she crouches at the water’s edge, happily letting a swan take seeds directly from the seed bag. She carefully attempts to touch the swan; it’s a little wary, and it flinches initially, but with patience, she is able to briefly stroke its wing. She seems quite at peace, surrounded by the birds.

Two swans float gracefully on a boating lake
Peace, and grace.

(AI-generated image produced using Stable Diffusion)

You watch as you consider the last couple of days.

Meeting new people and socialising has gone well so far, with the washerwomen, the beggars, and the staff and students at The Warrior’s Edge all being good starting points. And with your VIP pass at Stardust, that could be a good way to get to know some new friends even more; even Ameronis is a candidate for that.

Aside from that, you now have the option to try and learn some new skills as well, or improve your existing skills and fitness at the training club. You could kill two birds with one stone, and make new friends and gain skills at the training club. You snort at your poor choice of wording, but shake your head.

On the other hand, seeing if there was something you could do to help improve the beggars’ situation was also on your to do list. It’s unlikely you could do much, but you did want to at least try.

With no other plans for the day, you figure it’s time to make some now, as you decide what to do for the rest of the afternoon and the coming evening.

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Behind the Curtain

Continuing with previously established elements, I focused on fleshing out the staff and lessons at The Warrior’s Edge, as well as the washerwomen.

As for the previous vote, it looks like more exploration is in order, with “Continue exploring the city” winning with around 24% of the vote in total. “Hang out with the washerwomen after work” and “Go to Stardust in the evening” only had a single vote of difference between them, with around 17 and 16% of the votes respectively.

The results of today’s vote may further solidify the level of interest the readers have in the washerwomen; do y’all genuinely like them, or is it more to stave of boredom more than anything else, etc.? We shall see!


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